Friday, August 5, 2011

I don't even feel like putting a title on here...but i just did....oops...

Hey guys sorry i didn't post yesterday I didn't wake up until like 12 and me and dad went skating like right after i woke up so by the time we got back i didn't really feel like posting so ya.... And i even had a post planned for yesterday....:( Oh well i'll probably post it monday. Ok so i've discovered this awesome new song it's called "Stay Awake" by Example. BUT it doesn't officially come out on itunes until the 28th of august...BUT its on youtube so if you feel like listening to it go there. And if you love it like i do then you can pre-order it on itunes!! YAY! But give it a chance and i promise you will love it just like me!! Anypickle heres Chapter 8!! yay your almost done with the first part!! OH YEAH!! i posted a new poll but its ALLLLLLLL the way down at the bottom of my blog page so don't forget to check that out!!! just keep scrolling until you make it down to the bottom!!



Chapter 8

Silver Hale
Thursday, June 9th, 2011


Is this really happening? I thought to myself as I lay on my bed relaxing before going to bed. It has been 2 day since Coach had told me that I was an Aeros and explained all the things that had been happening and why I had seen that weird creature. And that night of the day he told me he came into my dream to train and help me hone in on my skills. My ability was to be able to sing a melody and have it do damage to the person sung to. The 3 melodies I came up with on instinct were “Melody of dominance”, which put a spell over a person and allowed me to control their every move, “Melody of awareness”, which took away a persons vision and hearing temporarily, and “Melody of shift” Which allowed me to change into any animal I could think of, real or not.

Coach also taught me the basics of a katana and a bow and arrow. Personally I was better at the bow and arrow. Tonight we were going to go over everything once more before we had to leave for the Nivanna Friday night.

I had decided to make up the excuse that I was going on a college road trip with my friends for the whole summer. I was a little disappointed that my plan to take custody was postponed but I had planned on having my siblings go to our grandmother’s until I got back. I didn’t want to take the risk of leaving them with our father. As I was thinking of all these things I slowly dozed off.

When I awoke I was in my dream training ground. Coach Jackson was sitting off to the side hunched over reading something. He was in his spirit form which I had come to know well. His Nive’s name was Kimwaw Taibel and he was about maybe an inch taller than he normally was and he had on a tight red shirt with black, metal shoulder pads on over it. On his legs he had loose black, silk pants with a white silk belt. He also had a white leather sheathe hanging loosely on his waist. His hair was black with one white highlight which he had pulled back in a pony tail with the white part braided. His face was always sophisticated looking with high cheekbones and narrow eyes the color of sand. His ears were elfish looking with 3 gold earrings, two on the bottom and one on top.

“Have you been here long Coach?” I asked him as I walked over to where he was and sat down across from him.
“No, not really…I was just kind of browsing the library of Nivanna for books on you singing abilities. But so far I have only found one but that has a couple melodies you can use on stronger opponents.” He said handing me the book. I leafed through the pages and saw several new melody names, some for attacks, some for controlling time, and others for controlling the elements like earth, fire, air, and water.
“Wow…Coach, thanks…” I said still looking through the book. I got up and walked a little bit away from Coach. I found what I was looking for and sung the sweet melody. His hand stopped still above the book he was holding. I walked over and looked at my now frozen in time coach. I set the book down and grabbed Coaches torso and picked him up and then set his frozen body upside down on his head still sitting cross legged with the book. I then walked back to where I was with the book in my hands. I sung the rest of the melody which unfroze time. I then watched as coach collapsed on his head now in a very odd looking position. I doubled over laughing.

“Haha, very funny.” He said sarcastically. He bent over and grabbed his book. He held it up on his hand kind of like a tray of food. It then rose up above his hand and started spinning very fast. He took a few fast steps forward and then launched the book at my head. I ducked right at the last second and it narrowly missed me. I then ran over to where I had placed my bow and quiver. I quickly pulled them on and poised an arrow. By that time Coach had already gotten another book ready. I pulled back on the bow string and got ready to strike. He then threw the book and I ducked and released the arrow it also just narrowly missed his head.

“You’re getting good Hale.” He said making another book appear with a snap of his fingers. “But are you good enough?” He launched another book then another and another. Each I dodged just barely but he didn’t leave enough time between each launch for me to get a clear shot. I know what to do I thought to myself. As I continued dodging his books I hummed the time freezing melody under my breath. When time stopped I walked over to Coach and took of his silk belt and positioned him in a hog tie position. I then tied his wrists and ankles together. I backed away and the finished humming the melody.

He wasn’t exactly expecting to be tied up so his weight was unbalanced and his face hit the ground with a loud thud. He turned his face to the side and said, “Good job. For now, but don’t expect that move to be your only because some Nives are immune to it because of how high their Uri level is. Now could you untie me, it may not seem it but this position isn’t very comfortable.”

“Are you going to throw more flying books of doom at me?” I said squatting down by his head.

“No.” he replied.

“Ok.” I said as I untied him. He then let his arms and legs flop onto the ground. He stood up and then walked over to collect all the books he had thrown at me.

Wednesday, August 3, 2011

What? huh? WHAT'D YOU SAY?!?!

haha did you like my impersonation of an old person? haha anywasy!!! Can you believe we're already on chapter 7?? Only 2 more until PART 2!! OMG!!! haha i'm you're ecstatic!! I'm already on the 5th chapter of part 2!! YAYAY!! anypickle im actually thinking of ending the "book" at the end of part 2 and then starting book 2! yay! haha your probably like "Dude get on with the story already!!" ok ok calm down here you go!!

 Chapter 7

Kastle Kozo
Tuesday, June 7th, 2011

I don’t know if can keep doing this over and over again I think to myself as I walk into my drama class. Yesterday and most of today had been horrible with everyone in my classes asking me “What happened?” and “Are you ok?” It was really starting to get on my nerves. I walked over to my desk and sat down. Today was the last day of filming and I didn’t have anymore scenes so I put my head down on my desk and closed my eyes. For the whole class I sat listening to the hustle and bustle of the filming.

About 30 minutes before class ended Mr. Muboz came over to my desk and said, “Kastle, can I see you after class?”
“Sure.” Was all I said and then he nodded and walked back over to the set.

When class ended I slowly walked up to Mr. Muboz’s desk.
“Kastle, have you ever thought that you were somehow different from everyone?”
“Sure I guess…” I answered uncertainly.
“Well you are Kastle, you are very different.”
“Mr. Muboz I’m not sure I’m getting what you’re trying to say.”
He chuckled a little. “What I am about to explain is going to be confusing but just trust me ok?”
“Ok…?” And so over the next 30 minutes Mr. Muboz explained how I was an Aeros and he was my guardian. He also explained the Nivanna and the rumor going around about an evil man named Ridor and how I was in danger because of his minions.
“Do you understand Kastle?” He asked as I just sat there staring at him.
“I think so…So these Aeros, you said they had special abilities right?”
“Yes.”
“Then what’s mine?” I asked curiously.
“From our studies we have figured out that you have a persuasive ability that lets you persuade anyone into doing anything. As well as putting illusions into a person to make their brain either think they’re in less pain or more pain than they actually are.”
“What about combat wise?”
“I can teach you later how to control an Aqua Katana which allows you to not only control the water making up the blade it also gives you the power to freeze and unfreeze any water that comes from the katana as well as normal water as long as you are near the katana.”
“Hmm… sounds good Mr. Muboz…When do I get to learn how to do all of these things?”
“Tonight in your dream I will come in and teach you.”
“Ok! Then can I go now?”
“Yeah sure.” He said as I walked away from his desk and towards the door. “Oh and Kastle don’t tell anyone about this ok?”
“Ok!” I said and waved as I walked out into the hallway.

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“How am I supposed to control this again?” I asked Mr. Muboz from across the white space of the training ground in my dream. He was trying to teach me how to control the water flow from the aqua katana but he wasn’t exactly the best teacher. He had already taught me the basics of how to control my Uri but I needed more time to really get used to it.
“Just hold the handle and focus on the Uri of the water.” He replied back. I tried to focus but I just couldn’t get right on the Uri for some reason. Just then I heard a yelling. I looked up to see a very scary looking Mr. Muboz coming right at me with his sword.
“No! No, I’m not ready yet!” I said starting to turn and run away. He chased me around for a couple minutes but then I tripped and fell on my face I quickly turned around and started scooting back on my butt.
“Focus on the Uri, Kastle!” He was still charging at me so I held up the sword handle and hoped that he wouldn’t kill me. I heard he blade swish forward and I squeezed my eye tighter. When I thought the blade was about to make contact I felt little drops of water hit my face. I opened my eyes and saw that I had managed to stop his blade with a little part of my blade that had come out. I was about to gloat when I felt his foot make contact with my side. I went flying right above the ground then fell and rolled a very painful couple of feet. I writhed about for a couple seconds then managed to get my self back on my feet.
“What the heck?” I yelled, wincing at the pain in my side.
“Just because you countered that doesn’t mean that you can give up! See if you can do it again! But better this time!” he replied. He came running at me again and this time I could feel most of the Uri from the water so I focused on it and charged at him. I was about to bring my sword down on his chest but he disappeared. I then felt his Uri come from behind me I turn brought the blade down but he wasn’t there just as I felt his Uri behind me again but this time I wasn’t fast enough and I felt his blade dig deep into the flesh on my back. I then staggered forward and fell onto my knees then on my face. I just lay there for a couple minutes breathing heavily.

I got up with the last of my strength and poised my sword towards him. Now I was angry and he was going to get it. I put all my focus on the Uri of the water and I felt the handle get heavier in my hand. I glanced down at it and the water amount had doubled from what I had it at before. It was now about four and a half feet long and about 6 inches thick. Let’ do this I thought to myself. And for the next 10 minutes Mr. Muboz and I sparred. I actually got a couple hits in but he got more. By the time we were both too tired to go on I was covered in cuts and bruises. Most of the cuts were shallow but the one on my back was pretty deep and it was still bleeding pretty badly.

“Good job today Kastle, you worked pretty hard. Sorry about that cut on you back but I had to get you motivated somehow…Here wrap this around it and by the time you come back here it will be healed.” He said handing my some thick gauze. I took it.
“Can I have some privacy?” I said aloud and a small room with a door appeared around me. I quickly took my shirt off and wrapped my back and torso with the gauze. I put my shirt on over the gauze and walked out of the room as it disappeared. I sat back down on the ground across from Mr. Muboz.
“How do we get out of here again?” I asked him leaning back on my hands but then wincing again from the pain.
“Just fall asleep.” He lay down of his side using his arm as a pillow. I did the same and fell asleep.

Monday, August 1, 2011

RE: Music it's a love/hate relationship...

thanks to who is in this picture and to
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This is what i would dance like but girl version.
HEY!! ok so you must be wondering why i am writing another one of these. "Darby, why are you writing this again? We all already know that you love heavy rock bands now!" Well the reason is that i have actually changed my preference again!! Haha I'm a person that changes their mind a lot so get used to it!! Anycucumber i have started liking techno/dance music better now! Like this song called "Mr. Saxobeat" Its a pretty good song it actually makes me want to dance even though i am like the worst dancer ever!! haha but I'm not kidding I'm not a very good dancer...Anyway if your a fan of techno dance then check it out!!

Ok so have any of you heard of a site called playlist.com?(<--- click here!) Its pretty awesome with having just about every song you can think of!! And if you sign up you can actually make a whole playlist of songs you like! And the best part is its all free!! Its free for non members as well!! and unlimited so i go there a lot. If you love music and free things then go check it out!! NOW! no seriously right now. Btw sorry this is soooooo short but who cares!!

haha Anyway thanks always!! PEACE LOVE AND STRAWBERRIES!

A title? Why would i need one of those silly things??

:) Hey peoples!! Ok so for now i've decided to call my story/book type thing "The Nivanna" But i'm starting to think thats a really lame title so i started thinking how bout "I'm a what?!" it helps sell it a little better i think... But idk what do you think? Sooo anyschnitzel heres the 6th chapter!! Hope you enjoy and also i posted friday but no one came to read it because Jaimee didn't get to post it on FB so don't forget to check out the post before this, "<insert lame title here>". Thanks always!!!



Chapter 6

Wysh Bennett
Tuesday, June 7th, 2011

I was walking to my 1st period class when I heard someone calling my name. I turned around to where the sound was coming from and saw Mr. Carter coming down the hall calling my name.
“Mr. Carter what’s wrong? Why are you all out of breath?”
“You’re in danger and we need to leave now.” He pulled me into an empty classroom. He still had a hold of my wrist.
“Mr. Carter, how are we leaving if we’re in a classroom?’’ I asked him but he didn’t answer but he was whispering something under his breath.
“Close your eyes Wysh” He said quietly. I was about to ask why but the look on his face was telling me I better not. So I closed my eyes and then I heard him say “Warp.” I felt a rush of wind and then he said “Ok you can open your eyes now.”

I opened my eyes and saw that we were in a different empty classroom but it wasn’t my school.
“Where are we?” I asked looking around but again he didn’t answer.
“Follow me.” He said as he walked out into the hall. He was walking fast and I was having trouble following him through the giant crowd of high school people.
“Mr. Carter, wait up!!” I called out but he didn’t slow down. He then turned and opened one of the classroom doors I followed in behind him. The class room was your typical high school science lab but there was a pretty lady in a red blouse and black pencil skirt sitting behind the desk at the front of the room. Her reddish blonde hair was elegantly pulled back in a braid that reached just above her waist. She noticed us walk in and quickly stood up.
“Imoro, what are you doing here?” I stood behind Mr. Carter peeking from behind him. Do they know each other? She just called him by his real name… I thought.
“Ieri, we have a slight problem. I met with the right leg today…He said he had come to destroy us before we could tell our Aeros. I brought Wysh because I couldn’t leave her where he could get to her.” He moved to expose me hiding behind him. I shyly waved at the lady.
“Oh Imoro…” she said bringing her fingers to the bridge of her nose. “How could you do something so stupid and dangerous? You could have gotten yourself killed as well as her!” she said pointing to me.
“Well I didn’t so…”
“So have you really told her?”
“Yeah, and I had to explain the whole thing with the Ridor rumors.”
“Ok. Well let me go find my Aeros so I can tell him as well.” She said walking towards the door. “Don’t leave or touch anything.” Then she left.
“Where are we Mr. Carter? And who was she?” I asked him.
“We are in LA, California and she is Ieri Atris. She is Captain of the 2nd Red Company named Lamr. Her human name is Penny Tabor.” As he finished talking Ms. Tabor walked back in with a boy about my age behind her.
“Micah this is Wysh Bennett and Joseph Carter.” Ms. Tabor said introducing us.
He waved to us then turned and said, “Do they have something to do with what you were going to tell me?”
“Actually yes but just let me explain first.” And so she told Micah pretty much everything Mr. Carter had told me and when she was done he turned to me and asked If Mr. Carter was my guardian. She said yes. He then asked what his power was and she said super strength and you can heal people as well as bring them back to life if they have been dead for less than 3 hrs.
“Wow…Is this all real? Or is this some kind of bad joke?”
“No Micah this is definitely not a dream or joke.” Mr. Carter said.
“We need to call the others to tell them to tell their Aeros. Now that this thing knows where we all are then we need to leave to the Nivanna as soon a possible. I can locate the portal but it will take a while, at least 4 days.”
“Ok so I guess the kids will finish up school and then we’ll all get together somewhere. We also need to train them in their dreams to help them get ready.” Mr. Carter told us.
“Yes.” Ms. Tabor replied.
“Ok it’s settled then, I guess me and Wysh will leave now. See ya’ll in a couple days!” he said waving to Micah and Ms. Tabor. I also waved as Mr. Carter took hold of my wrist and then said, “Warp.” I quickly closed my eyes and when I opened them we were back in the classroom we had left from.
“Do I just go to my class now?”
“Yep.” He said letting go of my wrist and walking toward the door.
“Mr. Carter?”
“Yeah?” he said looking back at me.
“Thanks…for protecting me from that thing…”
He chuckled as he walked back to me and then ruffled my hair. “No problem kid.” I pushed his hand away and walked out of the classroom into the hall and then walked down to my next class.

Thursday, July 28, 2011

[insert lame title here]

Hey people!! Ok so starting next week i will start only posting chapters on Monday, Wednesday, and Friday!! The other days i will talk about some random thing! YAY! haha but really i'm thinking of calling them something like Chonday, Chanesday, and Chiday. ITS FRIDAY FRIDAY GOTTA GET DOWN ON FRIDAY! Anypickle, here's the 5th chapter! ARE YA'LL AS EXCITED AS ME!?!?! (probably not) :) HERE YA GO!


Chapter 5

Imoro Iacha (Mr. Carter)
Tuesday, June 7th, 2011

When I woke up from the training session I got up from bed and then found my phone and called an old friend.
“Hello?” I heard.
“Hey, it’s me but I think they have tapped the line so I’ll make it quick. I told her.” I said quickly then hung up. I looked down at my bedside clock and saw it was already 7:45. I have to hurry or I’m going to be late! I thought to myself. I quickly went to my little apartment bathroom and took a shower and got ready for school. At around 8:10 I scurried out of my apartment and drove to the school. When I stopped at a traffic light I looked over at the car next to me. Gross I thought that guy is picking his nose! I quickly looked away. The light then turned green and I pulled forward. But just then a car running the red light crashed straight into my side of my car. I then climbed out of the passenger side door to then collapsed on the ground surprised I hadn’t broken anything that badly I watched as my bones pulled themselves back into place and several shallow cuts heal but the more deep ones were left unhealed. I stood back up to check on the other driver. But when I got to the car there was no one in it. I looked around searching for the victim.
“Hey, did you see where that person went?” I asked one of the people who had gathered to help out. He just stared at me in shock like I was a ghost. I then shook him a little.

He then said, “There was a purplish person who got out and then jumped up onto the building over there.” He pointed over to the building behind me “He also had red eyes and these pointy elf ears.”
“Ok thanks.” I said while running back towards the building. I was about to also jump up but decided against it and climbed up the fire escape ladder. When I got up to the top I found the offending man. He was just like they had described in the rumors. He was average height but he had light purple skin and short green and black hair that hung around his face. He had wine colored eyes. He was wearing a white formal shirt with a leather jacket over it and had dark blue jeans with black and white converse.
“Are you Kic Terabance?” I asked. “Literally the right leg of Ridor Terabance?”
“Yes very good!” he taunted while smirking.
“Why did come for me?”
“Because if I kill the guardians first then the Aeros would never find out that they were ever needed.”
“Well you’re a little late for me because I have already told my Aeros.” I pulled my spirit form out of my human form and set the human shell to the side. I then turned back to the Dark Nive and drew my Ken. (Or double sided Japanese sword)
“Really now? Then I guess I’ll just have to defeat both of you.” He said now pulling up his right pants leg and touched a katana tattoo on his calf. It then glowed and he put his hand into his skin and pulled the katana right out. He came running toward me, sword poised for attack. I closed the gap between us by running toward him as well. I swung my sword upwards towards his abdomen but he disappeared right before I was to hit him. I felt his Uri behind me as he reappeared behind me, trying to hit me on my back. I jumped away quickly but his sword still managed to make a shallow gash on my back. I felt it heal over.

Jeez that was close… I thought to myself. I charged back at him using the trick he had used but this time I appeared behind him long enough for him to turn around to attack but then I flashed back to where I was before and brought my sword down on his shoulder making a deep cut. I back flipped away as he screamed out then turned around quickly to try to hit me. I countered his sword and then pushed hard back against him. He wasn’t expecting me to counter so he started to stumble backwards. I quickly stepped forward and stabbed my katana through his chest.

But then he started laughing. Like not just any normal laugh, this laugh sounded psychotic. He grabbed my sword where it had impaled him and broke it in half with his hand. Except that one half was still inside him. He placed his hand on my chest and the next thing I know I lying on the ground at least 20 feet away. He started slowly walking toward me but then he pulled out the half of the sword that was in him. Oh....my…god…he just took that attack like it was nothing!
“You looked surprised!” He said chucking. “Did you really think that YOU, a little bitty red captain, could defeat me so easily?” He knelt down to where I was still lying on the ground. “Maybe next time, Captain.” He patted my head then disappeared.

I stood up and went back to my human form. I put my spirit form back into it and then quickly went back down the fire escape. I didn’t want to be stopped by the police now surrounding the crash I had been involved in so I went around to the other side of the building. I wasn’t far from the school so I ran the rest of the way I have to get to her before he does. I thought as I pushed my self to run faster. I burst through the front doors of the school building. I looked both ways down the hall looking for Wysh. I saw her blonde and red hair bobbing in the crowd and ran toward her.

CLICK ME!! CLICK ME!! I'M A LONELY LITTLE LINK!!

haha i got ya'll again! jk but seriously guys!! I thought more people would come visit my blog. (AM I REALLY THAT BORING???) I dare you to guess how many viewers i got on tuesday... 2.. and i'm not kidding only two people read my blog that day...It actually made me feel sad...I know that's kinda pathetic but still... :"( Any way here's the 4th chapter!! YAYAYAY because i know you guys were just DYING to read it!! haha seriously guys if this story is really boring then just tell me and i'll stop torturing you with it! :) anyway like always FEEDBACK is appreciated! lol :) HERE IT IS!! TADAH!!! And i promise this definitely makes up for all the uber boring-ness in the last 3 chapters. Also if ya'll have questions on whats happening and you either know my num or post a question and i'll try my best to explain!




Chapter 4

Wysh Bennett
Monday, June 6th, 2011

“Wow, Wysh…this…is…amazing!” Mr. Carter said while looking at my painting I had just finished. And I had to admit it did look pretty good. It was an image of something I had seen in my dream last night. That something had been this small looking little wooden shack. The dream me walked in and inside was a like a whole other world. It was like nothing I had ever seen and I thought it was just so beautiful that I just had to paint it to remember it.
“Thanks Mr. Carter, it was this thing I saw from my dream the other night and I felt like painting its beauty.”
“A job well done Ms. Bennett.” He said as he handed it back to me. I smiled and then went back to my seat to work on my last project of the year. Mr. Carter had said we could do really anything we wanted to do so I was making a black and white marker self portrait. The only thing that was in color was my eyes which were very detailed. I worked the rest of the class on my portrait and when the bell rang I rushed over to the window to set my portrait on the art rack. As I was about to turn back around I glanced out the window and briefly saw something dart through the courtyard of the school. I looked back all the way just in time to see two tiger type looking creatures run by, but the strange thing was that these weren’t normal tigers they had snake skin. Also one had white eyes and the other had dark red ones.

I walked over to Mr. Carter’s desk.
“Mr. Carter?” I said.
“Hmm?” he said looking up from a piece of art he was working on.
“Is there such an animal with a tiger’s body but snake skin?” I asked.
“Yes but only in the Nivanna…” he replied.
“What’s the Nivanna?”
“Well…If I tell you, you have to promise not to tell anyone else anything about it.” He said as he stood and walked around to the front of the desk and leaned against it.
“The Nivanna is what humans would call dreamland or where you would go during your dreams. There are beings there called “Nives” and they protect all dreams as well as Nivanna itself from evil. To continue protecting the Nivanna there is this school where gifted Nives come to train. They are ranked by colors, from Brown being the first squad you enter but also the weakest going up to Purple, Blue, Green, Yellow, Orange, Red, and White being the very strongest or otherwise known as “The All-Knowing Whites”. Reds are the second strongest but only a select few make it that far but the few that do either become a company captain or become a part of one of the already existing Red companies. A long, long time ago the Whites created this thing called a Dark Nive. But things got bad and they attempted to destroy this Dark Nive. They had thought they were successful. But there are rumors going around that they actually didn’t destroy him completely and that he wants revenge on the whites. Except this time he has to other people with him and these two other people can transform into these creatures you just saw. They have recently been coming to this world to try and destroy the only people that can destroy them. They are called the Aeros. Wysh, you are one of these Aeros. There are 4 all together. We wanted to wait until your school year was over but I haven’t ever been one for following directions…”

“So…wait…what exactly are these Aeros? And who else is an Aero? Do I know them? Are you a Nive?”

“Well Aeros are these special humans that use more than the average 10% of the human brain. And possesses special abilities with the side of their brain they use the most, Left or Right. Right being creativity and left being smarts. The other Aeros are one girl named Kastle and two boys named Silver and Micah. Kastle and Micah live in California and Silver lives in Texas. They don’t know that they are Aeros right now but their guardians will tell them soon. And yes I am a Nive; actually I am a Red Company captain. My real name is Imoro Iacha, Captain of the 4th red company named Liabel!” He said standing proudly. “But for now you can continue calling me Mr. Carter.”

“Do you know what my ability is?”
“Yes, you have the ability to bring any of your drawings to life or bring them to their death. But you must learn to control this. Tonight when you go to sleep I will be in your dream waiting to help you train”
“Ok…man this is so cool…I knew I was some how different from everyone…”
Mr. Carter laughed and then said, “Yes well just don’t go around telling everyone about this, ok?”
“I promise I won’t.” I replied. “Thank Mr. Carter, for being honest with me… I’m excited to try out my new power! Anyway see you later!” I waved and then left the classroom.

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I walked up to the front door and unlocked it. I walked in and went straight to my bedroom. I grabbed some paper and started drawing. I wasn’t really paying attention to what I was drawing and ended up drawing the two tiger snake things. I colored in only the eyes and when I finished I admired how good they looked even though they looked like things straight out some horror movie. But then I remember what Mr. Carter said about my Aeros power. I then proceeded to get a giant black sharpie and completely cover the tigers until they were just one black mass on the paper. If these things were as powerful as Mr. Carter said they were then I didn’t want to take the risk of accidentally bringing them to life. For the next hour I made up and drew several simple but innocent looking animals. If I were to be doing this in battle I the things had to be quick and simple.

When I was finished with my 10th animal it was already 10:35 and I was tired from waking up early this morning so I decided to call it a night. I quickly fell asleep but then awoke on the floor of an all white space. I sat up and looked around.
“Ah! You’re awake, good. We can get started now.” I turned to look at the voice and was expecting to see Mr. Carter but this wasn’t Mr. Carter. This man was the very definition of the saying “tall, dark, and handsome.” He was about 6’ 8” with tanned skin, and amber colored hair that looked like a blowing flame with two pieces of curly hair falling in his face. He had narrow eyes the color of melted butter and large pointed elf ears. He wasn’t wearing a shirt and was proudly showing off his chiseled abs and chest. He had a black and red tattoo on his left peck that was the number 4. On his shoulders he had black metal shoulder pads. On his lower half he had loose, red silk karate pants held up with a white silk belt. On his pants he had a yellow and black design in the shapes of what looked like flower petals. On his feet he had white tabi socks but nothing else. I looked back at his face last. His cheekbones were very prominent and he had a scar running across his left eye and nose and ending on his cheek.

“Are you done checking me out?” He asked with a smirk on his face. I felt my face go hot with blush as I stood up.
“I was NOT checking you out… You’re my teacher that’s weird!” I replied angrily.
“Then why are you blushing?”
“Shut up…”
“What was that? I didn’t hear you…” he said cupping his hand against his ear.
“I said SHUT UP!!” I yelled at him. He started laughing which only made me angrier. “Stop it!”
He slowly stopped laughing then said, “Fine, fine either way were wasting time we only have 8 hours to train tonight!”
“Only 8 hours…” I said under my breath. “Ok let’s get started then!” For the next 4 hrs he explained and taught me how to hone in on my pure Uri which was like my natural spiritual energy. Mr. Carter said everyone has it but not everyone has the ability to control it like I did. In those 4 hours he taught me a few simple spells like “walker’s insanity” which made the person hit not able to walk properly but it wasn’t very effective on strong Nives like Mr. Carter. The others he taught me were called “Rapid-fire exploder” and “Long range voltage gun” they were like those spells that you shot out of you’re hand by suppressing your power all in you hand.

After that, for the remaining 4 hours he gave me a wooden sword and then proceeded to teach me some basic moves. He actually hit me several times while doing his so called “teaching” giving me several cuts on my face and arms. He assured me that when I woke up I wouldn’t have any real damage to my body.

“It’s about time for you to go…Good job today you did really well! We’ll do this again tomorrow night as well plus some new stuff.” Mr. Carter told me.
“Ok…” I said still out of breath from our sword fight. “But how do I get back?”
“Just fall asleep shouldn’t be to hard considering that you spirit form looks pretty tired.”
“Ok, then I guess I’ll see you today in class.”
“Yep…” he said as he lay back on his back. He started snoring within a couple seconds. I then also lay back and fell asleep.

Wednesday, July 27, 2011

DON'T READ THIS!!! WHATEVER YOU DO DON'T READ IT!! <(^_^)>

Haha tricked you!! (if any of you were tricked... -_-) Anyway i decided today i was going to post the third chapter but change the boring title of the post to something that made you just want to click on it. Well here it is! And for those of you who clicked but haven't read the first 2 chapters go back to the posts "the book I would write...2" and "the book i would write...3" And just so ya'll know the 4th chapter makes up for all the boringness going on in the 1st and 2nd so just hang in there!!

Chapter 3

Silver Hale
Thursday, June 2nd, 2011

“Hey Silver.” My friends said as I walked up to them in our homeroom.
“Hey guys, what’s up? Ya’ll excited for summer?” I said pumping my fist in the air.
“You know it!” I heard someone call out. A bunch of cheers came from our crowd.
“Hey! You kids need to be quiet, its study hall today. Please find your seats.” Our teacher, Mr. B, called out. Of course Mr. B was what everyone called him because his real last name was too long and hard to pronounce. He was pretty cool for a high school teacher but he wasn’t my favorite. My favorite teacher was my history teacher/coach, Mr. Jackson. I had his honors history class next. His class was the only class I could be myself in. This real me was afraid to come out to the light of day because it was scared of how everyone would react to it. The real me was actually smart and not this fake, no-brain popular kid. I didn’t like acting like this but I was scared of what would happen if I showed to real me to my friends. Would they make fun of me? Call me a nerd? I couldn’t afford to loose all of this built up protection with just one confession. So I sat there pretending to be something I’m not just to keep these people I called friends. Well at least we were all seniors and we were graduating next year.

“Silver, are you listening? Come on were going to be late!” My friend Lewis practically screamed in my ear.
“Ok Lewis I heard you, you don’t have to yell.” We walked out of Mr. B’s classroom and said bye to each other and then walked off toward our next classes. Mine was only two doors down from Mr. B’s class so I took my time walking. As I walked in Coach Jackson called out a hello to me. Coach Jackson was a young looking guy with blonde hair and sand colored eyes which I thought was a little unusual but who really cared? He’s about average height but I was still taller than him. I waved and then took my seat waiting for the bell to ring.

As I was, I looked out the window the parking lot. Suddenly I saw something dart between the parked cars. I leaned closer to the window to try and get a better look. It walked out into an unused parking space and looked straight at the window but then disappeared. The thing I saw was this tiger looking creature but had the skin of a snake. When it looked this way it clearly had dark red eyes. I turned around checking to see if anyone else had seen that thing. I found Coach Jackson standing behind me still staring out the window.
“Did you see that thing Coach?” I could see the fear in his eyes but when he looked down at me, I didn’t see it anymore.
“What are you talking about? I didn’t see anything…” He said distantly as he then turned and walked back to his desk. I was going to have to talk to him.

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When class ended I waited for everyone to leave then I walked up to Coach’s desk.
“Coach, I know you saw that thing out there. What was it?” I said to him.
“I don’t know what you’re talking about…” He said not looking up from the paper he was grading.
“Tell me that to my face Coach.”
“I can’t... just… Silver don’t worry about it right now. Now if you please, could you leave, I have important business to attend to.”
“Fine.” I said angrily as I walked out of the room and to my last class of the day. I sat through my last class in a bad mood not really talking to anyone. As soon as the bell rang I went straight to my car and drove home. When I got there I jumped onto my computer and tried looking up any mythology with a tiger and snake skin but came up empty. That meant the thing I saw wasn’t part of this world at all… that made me hope it would never show up again.

“Knock, Knock…hey Silver dinner’s ready.” My 12 year old sister said peeping through my open bedroom door.
“Ok, thanks Abby, I’ll be down in just a second.” I replied. My sister had taken over the jobs that our mother had left when she was killed in a car accident 4 years ago. She now did the all the house cleaning and cooking all while going to middle school. I felt bad for her because I wasn’t always around to help her and god only knew where our father was. He only came home for short periods to sleep and eat. He was now a heavy alcoholic and was always out. Just in the last year, had he started to be extremely abusive towards my little brother and sister and I. I was planning to take full custody of them when I graduate from high school. If I couldn’t gain custody then I had planned for my grandmother in New York to take us in.

I closed my laptop and stood up and stretched. I then walked down stairs to the kitchen.
“Your food is getting cold…” said my little brother Sam.
“Ok… Thanks for making dinner Abby.”
“It’s cool! I like cleaning and cooking it helps calm my nerves.” She replied. We then ate dinner in silence and when we were done Abby took our plates to wash them. Sam then walked off towards the living room. I asked Abby if she needed help and she said no so I went back to my room. It was already 9:00 so I decided to call it a night.